Oops did some in-depth anyway:
- Shortly after the song started I noticed that nearly the entire chart is focused around the vocals, which are quite slow and simple compared to the rest of the instruments accompanying her. While a vocal oriented chart isn't inherently a bad thing, mostly lone vocals is not what I would expect from a multi charted file's most difficult version (unless the vocals are just that impressively fast on their own).
- Several sections of this file have 12th notes where 16ths should be instead (e.g. 21.454, 28.842, 36.688, 44.996, ...) Use of assist ticks and song speed changing help a lot with things like this.
- Your chorus sections have multiple holds which extend far beyond any lyric or instrument (e.g. 77.303, 85.611).
- Your chorus sections have multiple arrows which are not holds which should be, assuming you are trying to be consistent with which sound lengths should be holds (e.g. 80.765, 89.995).
- Your hardest chart doesn't step the 8th notes between the 4ths at 94.380 and other chorus repetitions thereafter.
- Note at 103.611 should be an 8th later instead.
- Hold at 110.534 and additional iterations is not one held pitch, but several smaller notes within the duration. Lyrics only and following PR it'd look something like .
- Neglecting to step the beat at 117.919 is extremely noticeable, as you do some instrument stepping during the lyrical absence.
- Pad friendly to 119.303. Lyrics only, PR / pad balance. Can also apply to 126.686 or other iterations of this part of the song.
- Pad friendly to 134.073. Lyrics only, PR / pad balance. Can also apply to other iterations of this part of the song.
- Section starting at 146.534 is largely under-stepped. Lyrics are straight 8ths, which would make sense to step here, since you're stepping all lyrics anyway. You could have done 16th notes to piano roll at half speed, though that would be a difficulty spike which is probably unwarranted for a file or this difficulty.
- Missed 4th note lyric at 152.996
- Chorus loops after this, so same problems apply.
- Section starting at 187.150 is a bunch of really slow jacks. Considering the lively nature of the instruments, stepping the 4th kick for like 10 seconds is quite boring.
- Note on 210.535 and any beyond this are all ghost notes as the song has ended.
File was pretty much synced. Messed around a little and it seems like it's more around a constant 130bpm with an offset of ~1.627
Beginner
- I know it's beginner but holy hell those notes are spaced far apart from one another. Also with so few notes the PR problems are very much amplified.
Easy
- Looks more like a demonstration of basic pad patterns than it does something adhering to the sounds going on in the file. It's like a tutorial file with music in the background as opposed to me playing along with the music. The staircase while holding a note appears to be a bit of a spike in difficulty.
Medium
- This feels much more like a step of the lyrics and 4th kick than easy did, as opposed to tutorial patterns. The steps are hardly consistent, however that would be very boring if they were for sure. Oddly enough it appears like difficulty for medium is actually higher in various areas due to the 4th kick stepping that hard so often lacks. Hard could benefit from some 4th kick steps, or just additional instrument stepping to make it stack up to a minimum of the medium difficulty all the way through.
General:
- When possible, try to account for pitch relevance (PR) when stepping. This is the idea that pitch fluctuation should affect the way arrows are placed on the chart, typically where higher pitched sounds are stepped to the right, and lower ones to the left, and their position being relative to other pitches being hit within the last few notes. This is especially important when you are only stepping one instrument or aspect of the file, and it's apparent when the pitch is increasing or decreasing during it's play (due to having only one or two arrows to hit at once). PR is a guideline, and helps with immersion, but shouldn't over prioritize things like flow or the general difficulty level of your step.
- Try to account for layering when stepping as well. Layering is the idea that the number of sounds being stepped, and their apparent intensity within the song at certain sections, will have an impact on the number of arrows being placed in the chart at any given point. Mostly you focused on stepping only one thing at a time, and often times when a jump was created, there really wasn't an intensity difference from the rest of the content around it (e.g. 17.996 vs 21.668, 29.765 vs 36.668, 53.765 vs 55.149 or any other 4th in that whole area, ...).
- Play things over a ton of times to ensure everything makes sense relative to everything else. Sometimes you get caught up doing one thing in a section, and a different thing on another one. The file as a whole can suffer for it if you aren't careful.
Note that this file you made is far better than anything I tried to make when I first started, and that you have a fairly decent grasp on syncing. This is only intended to give you helpful info, not to put you down in any way. Keep working on stepping, practice makes perfect after all!Statistics: Posted by foxfire667 — Tue May 24, 2016 3:25 pm
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